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Animation is the process of bringing your imagination to life, Peaking at authers flash submitions can easly tell you more about that person. -wyatt
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No laughing.
The music was looped from some song about a kid whos a wigger (yes wigger)
The animation was... very below standards.
Try animating useing animated movie clips, (so pacmans mouth will open and shut over and over)
Also if its about pac man start it off with pacman and not... whatever that thing was...
Look up some tutorials on blood
Oh and one more thing, go to flash oreview and change the sound quality too anything higher than 16
Author's Response:
I looked through your reviews and I've noticed that your not very tactful at all, I hope you realize your reviews are your opinion, so don't treat them as if they were fact.
And by the way, we already know how to animate, this was just a 'for fun' animation, you don't need to treat everything so seriously.
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what that even animating? Lol go look up some tutorials or atleast make the hamster do something else than randomly tween around the screen.
The dance floor needs some work too, the tiles are no where near even
Author's Response:
no any good ones
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You ruined the joke when you gave away the pun in your comment info.
That and you stole the joke from "code monkies"
on anotehr note if your going to use a ghetto mic (your head phones in the mic slot) then please downlaod software inorder to edit it and make it sound good...
before i go the arm was so badley drawn it was obvious you where maekin ga bad loop.
Almost cute :P
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This was pointless, but you know how to exicute comedy XD
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You kinda went past your limitations on this. I mean, the script seemed improvised. It felt like you stole alought of jokes from cartoonnetork but just added curse words. which is sorta annoying... You even copied the "sue sue sue" from that "my gym partners a monkey" show.
Seems your not working on stuff from the edge of your childhood but more off your current self... That still watches cartoons.
You used way too many cheap childs programming anime animating styles. Like the 2 frame badley drawn/aniamted/synced laughing, and screaming. Even the angry eyes seemed copied off someing from wam (the tv network) or "GO GO PARODY RANGERS!"
You should try working off more your own mind than others...
Othher people do that syle because for one, they know how to use it. And make money from it. On another point its put into a script and pencil tested to see if it fits.
im not picking on you I'm just letting you know so mabe your stop doing it, The only thing it dose is get on peoples nerves.
The graphics where... not so good and i'd work on that too.
Such as draw things the way they are supposed to look.
what i mean by that is look at the playing cards the other guys holding. They look just like yu-gy-oh cards and that made the joke of them playing "go fish" not work. And it bugged me the rest of the movie.
Now i see why you had to put your other movie on hold.
Anyway get a script and better actors and stop talking like bad animie.
That and try to be more origanle.
Author's Response:
ok first off im working with the worlds smallest pen tablet here so cut me some slack with the art, and if i've said it once ill say it a thousand times I DONT KNOW THE SECRET TO SMOOTH LINE WORK WITH THE BRUSH TOOL! as for the mouthing, not much i can accomplish with that in 15 fps. the jokes were supposed to be mediocre, nothing more then a simple laugh to make you reminisce about the old stuff, thats why its a short not ment to be longer then a minute.
regardless of which i think i did pretty well with the art considering this is only my second real animation attempt. AND FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, not everyone is an animation god like kirbopher15
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Theres alought of better awesome tributes out there.
The voices just turned me off on this, luckly the animation was very smooth.
If you write a better script and have better voices (along with more sponteneous screaming) it will'd be pretty close to the real awesome movies
Author's Response:
mkay.
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but now im not.
I thought it was a full flash not an intro
also plz make the text dynamic so that it shows properly... least i think its dynamic it may have to be static
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And again you onley used cartoonnetwork jokes -_-
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No plot D<
Thats not even how the game starts, ends or begins, it has nothing to do with the game
you cant even add a background or re-size sprites correctley.
Onley use 12 yearold nicktoonnetwork jokes that onley come from someone whos picked on every day in school.
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Dude Bite me you pethetic piece of shit.
Im in the kitty krew and i dont spam, i help get spam get taken off.
This movie was terrible and felt like a slideshow of crap.
Learn to animate, this was nothing but chop, it was extremley choppy.
They didnt even do anything but stand there exchangeing bad diologe.
Learn also how to write a script and also if you so damn aggainst the KK and spam, why do you uplaod movies of even lower quality and then vote on them everyday. There is no way possible this had a 2.68 comeing out of the portal.
You vote everyday and get scores you dont diserve. That and you mispell and miss gramar everything even your ng page
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