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I give it a 10 for animation and style

I do not rate 10 because I liked it.

It fit the Japanese anime intro style very well, but towards the end it started to get alittle ridiculous. Such as way too many characters running together at once.

That and you should work on thier walking abit, mabe have them slowly moveing forward to look more like they are running. Then again that may not work with the style.

Well anyway, another thing its alittle to long to be an intro, cut it alittle lower.
It feals to long to be an intro, they run towards the end pretty long and each time it changes to a short clip of character spinning/possing it has to switch back to the running and show that character joining the group.

What turned me off is that you started adding other, unnecessary pokemon (cant stand pokemon) Then you had alittle robot thats legs hardly move scamper across with alittle man standing on it.

Your animation and style fitting is very good, but work on your walk cycles and planning.

flyboy42 responds:

It was service to the forum users, if I didn't do it, they would all complain, no offense guys.
It's only 30 seconds longer than the original OP
And those are the soviet pokemon, a strange group that started in MHQ, I don't think they all love pokemo

Uh?

It lacks direction and plot.

It seems that its a mish-mosh of many well known game/tv personality...

And none of them have crossed over to well...

Try working with story boards a little bit instead of making it up as you go along.

Already been done

I swear dude, I wish some of you authers would relise how gay these things are.
Seriously, this is the 15th naurito flash I've seen in the portal that pays no relevance to anything! It's always, and ALWAYS characters from the show singing or dancing to numa numa or "what is love" or some other over used song. Its extremely unoriginal and getting old. As much as I hate naurito, atleast make something that ties into the show instead of showing off how much "you know thats other watchers dont" from the cartoon. The animation is pretty chopy, I can see you used 12 fps, increase your frame rate, work on the eyes of your characters (they where rather large). Try working on something different, Naurito's been bleed to death.

If I was you, I would ignore all the 12 yearolds reviewing "OMG THAT WAZ AMAZING LOLO!!!!" and stay clear of a part two, theres no real scence. 1's enough especaily since this movie is just random tweens

Tahadation responds:

Didn't realise some people found it that annoying. I suppose your right now that I think of it.. I'll try to work on something more original

Not surpriseing, its awesome!

Wow, Stunning.
I'm not one for glam rock though DX.
The graphics and animation where once again amazing, very professional.
Your syncing is by far the best I have ever seen, very lifelike movements especially with the tv screen appearing to be liquid like that.

Not bad

Rather impressive graphics and music.
It may just be a loop but rather nice of one to boot!
Nice work in flash

You gave it effort.

I messed up and said rabbit joint to, so don't feal so bad.

Alright I do not think it deserves a score over 3 and how that happened I will never know.

How to improve: Work on your drawing in flash, and sync your audio.

Go back and create a new layer and add the music to it, then click the frame and change the audio from "start" to "stream".

That way your audio will stay together with the rest of the flash.

I had also ran into an error where the music would start and play again about midway through the movie, being the same song playing twice before it even finishes.

Not that well writen

I'm sorry, In all respect... This flash tries to hard to be funny. Now your previous eps where very enjoyable, but this one was... Bad humor and worst of all it cut short very early.

I guess making your own story board comes out better than trying to completely re-do an existing one from a movie.

Please, re-think your script and try to add more animation. You looped movie clips way too much and had the the heads bounce back and forth way too ridiculously.

What i mean by looping movie clips, you looped the crowd (just a bunch of dots) in a way I guess you meant to be funny, but it just looked really bad.

The entire script you used seemed to just be random outbursts, was the fight between alpha5 and the red guy really necessary? or the waffles, or the "IVE SEEN POWER RANGERS OVER 500000000 TIMES!"

Re-think your scripts, add more movement and don't rely on hype to make this thing popular

Oh wow

This wasn't made to be gay guys it was made to be just for lols, kinda like some of the tankmen parodies.

Anyway your aniamtion was slightly choppy, your cartoon likeness drawing skills and face'al expression where flawless XD.

It was pretty well synced but could have been exicuted alittle better along with mabe high quality adou.

Work alittle on your animation and syncing and you'll have it down.

BTW i am not useing this comment as a responce to al the negitive ones but morly help this movie get some better crit rather than useless and abusive comments :P

Slipziq responds:

at least you got it! and thanks :)

Im sorry

Why do people keep submitting stuff like this with the ententions to get NG users mad? realy and then put stuff like "REVIEW IF YOUR GAY" in the comment box.

Im not trying to back seat mod, but this is alittle ridiculus since its going to sit in the dusty corners of NG takeing up bandwith

Im sorry but we submit stuff to NG as art, art that we made. Not movies like this thats submitted to look cool infront of spammers or just to get underdog awards...

Gaizka responds:

You really are a stupid little boy.

Can't wait

lol hay waz

The animation looked smooth but lagged abit. I do not know how to remidy this, I cant just say "work on your animation" seeing is your better than me and i dont have alought of room for bashing.

one more thing that bugged me, the poses looked to generic along with the Unessisarily Safisticated weaponery.

You could add alittle more moveemtn seeing as when someones getting killed everyone else just stands there, still like a manican

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